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Decline
When we decline someone's suggestion, polite expression and clear reason should be accompanied for peaceful relationship.

Persuasive
Workers in the press like reporter and announcer are so persuasive that they sometimes go into the political circles.

Reject
Memories related to rejection in love often leave us a huge trauma and lessen our self-esteem.

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Decline
When we decline someone's suggestion, polite expression and clear reason should be accompanied for peaceful relationship.
>> When we decline someone's suggestion, it should be accompanied by a polite expression and a clear reason or peaceful a relationship.
Persuasive
Workers in the press like reporter and announcer are so persuasive that they sometimes go into the political circles.
>>Workers in the press like reporters and announcers are so persuasive that they sometimes go into the political circles.
OR
>>Journalists, including reporters and announcers, possess such persuasive skills that they often find themselves traversing into political spheres.
Rejection
Memories related to rejection in love often leave us a huge trauma and lessen our self-esteem.
Correct, or>>
Reject
When someone rejects us, the memory can inflict profound emotional trauma and significantly diminish our self-esteem.

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