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In your opinion, what is the ideal length of a vacation or trip abroad?

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I think that the longer the vacation or overseas trip, the better.
But as an office worker, there is a limit to the period of time I can take vacation and the amount of money I can spend on vacation is also limited, so it is common to not be able to use vacation as long as I want.
And also, in the case of overseas travel, travel to Europe or the United States requires a longer flight time than travel to nearby Asian countries, and the countries have different time zones from Korea, so an adjustment period is needed before and after the trip, so I think a longer period is needed.
So, speaking in my case,
I think 3 days and 2 nights is appropriate for a trip within Korea, 5 days and 4 nights for a trip to nearby Asian countries such as the Philippines, and 7 to 10 days for a trip to Europe or the United States.

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Hi, Sun!

Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)

- Kristine ^^ 

I think that the longer the vacation or overseas trip, the better.
>> Correct. 
But as an office worker, there is a limit to the period of time I can take vacation and the amount of money I can spend on vacation is also limited, so it is common to not be able to use vacation as long as I want.
>> Correct. 
Or >> I frequently find myself unable to take as much time off as I would like, though. As an office worker, I have time and money constraints that limit how much time I can spend on vacation.
And also, in the case of overseas travel, travel to Europe or the United States requires a longer flight time than travel to nearby Asian countries, and the countries have different time zones from Korea, so an adjustment period is needed before and after the trip, so I think a longer period is needed.
>> Correct. 
Or >> In addition, I believe a longer period of time is necessary for overseas trips. When it comes to international travel, flying to the US or Europe takes longer than flying to other Asian countries that are close by, especially when those countries are in different time zones from Korea.
So, speaking in my case, I think 3 days and 2 nights is appropriate for a trip within Korea, 5 days and 4 nights for a trip to nearby Asian countries such as the Philippines, and 7 to 10 days for a trip to Europe or the United States.
>> Correct. 
Or >> Therefore, based on my own experience, I believe that a vacation in Korea should last 3 days and 2 nights, traveling to a nearby Asian country like the Philippines should last 5 days and 4 nights, and a trip to Europe or the US should last 7-9 days.
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