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homework - it is not easy to ahieve our life.

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i think so too. it is not east to achieve our life goals.

but i don't understand the question.

what do you mean 'we stop trying'?

anyway, today english class was also fun. thank you!!

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Hello, Eve!
Maybe you didn't understand the question because you were wondering why we would stop trying to achieve our goals... ^.^") I ask you the question because sometimes we insist on achieving goals that are not actually for us, so we waste time pursuing things that are not meant for us... Also, maybe you don't give up when you want to achieve anything, heheh~ Anyway, it was just a tricky question ^_^  Also, I am glad to know that you enjoyed our class :)) See you again!~
Chammy
i think so too. it is not east to achieve our life goals.
>> I think so, too. It is not easy to achieve our life goals.
but i don't understand the question.
>> But, I don't understand the question.
what do you mean 'we stop trying'?
>> What do you mean by we stop trying?
anyway, today english class was also fun. thank you!!
>> Anyway, today's English class was also fun, thank you!!!
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