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회원님의 영작문

~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What are the pros and cons of AI?

The AI technology is every time growing fast.
There are many various kinds of AI, but yesterday I watched an amazing AI.
This is in a broadcasting station in South Korea, the announcer is not a person, this is an AI announcer.
The AI announcer's pronunciation and accent still strange, but I think most jobs will be replaced AI service in a few years.
Like that, AI's advantage are handle work quickly and it can instead people.
But the cons of AI that I think that it's not sentiment.
I think the meaning of sentiment in the above sentence it's also include rational love, but in other words, it's a warm felling between the people.
In other words, the heart of the machine and AI is cold.
Of course, I think we need to replace AI for easily exposed to danger jobs.
But, I don't think machine and AI replace enough mood, feeling, and vacancies in people.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Keon!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille


~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What are the pros and cons of AI?

The AI technology is every time growing fast.
>> The AI technology is growing fast every time.
There are many various kinds of AI, but yesterday I watched an amazing AI.
>> There are various kinds of AI, but yesterday I saw an amazing AI.
OR >> There are many kinds of AI, but yesterday I saw an amazing AI.
This is in a broadcasting station in South Korea, the announcer is not a person, this is an AI announcer.
>> CORRECT!
The AI announcer's pronunciation and accent still strange, but I think most jobs will be replaced AI service in a few years.
>> The AI announcer's pronunciation and accent is still strange, but I think most jobs will be replaced by AI service in a few years.
Like that, AI's advantage are handle work quickly and it can instead people.
>> Like that, AI's advantage is to handle work quickly and it can do it instead of people.
But the cons of AI that I think that it's not sentiment.
>> But I think the cons of AI is that it's not a sentiment.
I think the meaning of sentiment in the above sentence it's also include rational love, but in other words, it's a warm felling between the people.
>> I think the meaning of sentiment in the above sentence also includes rational love, but in other words, it's a warm feeling between and among people.
In other words, the heart of the machine and AI is cold.
>> CORRECT!
Of course, I think we need to replace AI for easily exposed to danger jobs.
>> Of course, I think we need to replace AI for peope who are easily exposed to dangerous jobs.
But, I don't think machine and AI replace enough mood, feeling, and vacancies in people.
>> CORRECT!

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