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Hi.
I was so busy correcting the contract of seperation with the tax accountant this morning.
After that, I sent it to my lawyer friend, and then he gave me back a corrected one.
Since I finished making a temparary contract form early than expected, I asked MJ to see me after today's work.
As you know, I didn't face him directly for more than one week, so I am nervous to think about the meeting with him.
I plan to give him the form of contract and ask to examine it later at his home.
I don't want to spend lots of my time with him because he may try to control me again with the method to shake my emotion.
All I need to do is being brave and vigilant.
Also, there are several things to be decided by him and me.
I will try to discuss about it as fast as I can.
I am going to meet him soon.
I hope that I can deal with him smoothly.
(After 20 minutes...)
I met and told him about everything that I prepared.
The atmosphere was somewhat cold, but both of us kept mind peaceful, I guess.
See you.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Hello! Good morning, Dr. Kim!

Finally, you have completed the separation contract! As I said, there will be many other revisions after the discussion with Dr. MJ. In your part, you only want the best for your remaining clinic staff and your property. In Dr. MJ's behalf, he also wants his best interest. In both your cases, I just want the both of you happy. But then, I am sure that your life will be happier and more peaceful without his presence.

It was best that you kept your meeting short and direct. There is no point of beating around the bush. Now, everything is clear and there will be no more manipulations from Dr. MJ. The cold mood was expected. Now, it is time to move on with your careers and lives.

I am glad about the outcome of your compositions. I noticed, when you have intense emotions, you tend to write more accurately. Thus, it might have been the same when you faced him yesterday. So, go over my suggestions below and note them down for your next composition. You did excellent!

See you in a few minutes.

-T. Donna~

Hi.
>> Correct!

I was so busy correcting the contract of seperation with the tax accountant this morning.
>> Correct!
Or: separation

After that, I sent it to my lawyer friend, and then he gave me back a corrected one.
>> Correct!

Since I finished making a temparary contract form early than expected, I asked MJ to see me after today's work.
>> Correct!
Or: temporary

As you know, I didn't face him directly for more than one week, so I am nervous to think about the meeting with him.
>> Correct! Very good sentence!

I plan to give him the form of contract and ask to examine it later at his home.
>> Correct!

I don't want to spend lots of my time with him because he may try to control me again with the method to shake my emotion.
>> Correct! Very good sentence!

All I need to do is being brave and vigilant.
>> All I need to do is to be brave and vigilant.

Also, there are several things to be decided by him and me.
>> Correct!

I will try to discuss about it as fast as I can.
>> Correct!

I am going to meet him soon.
>> Correct!

I hope that I can deal with him smoothly.
>> Correct!

(After 20 minutes...)
>> Correct!

I met and told him about everything that I prepared.
>> Correct!

The atmosphere was somewhat cold, but both of us kept mind peaceful, I guess.
>> The atmosphere was somewhat cold, but both of us kept our minds peaceful, I guess.

See you.
>> Correct!
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