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Have you ever experienced being completely wrong in your first impression?

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Absolutely yes. I've ever experienced it. That's my third ex-girlfriend. When I studied the TOEIC, I had a group to study. And, I met her there. She looked very cold, high-eyed, and expressionless at the first time. But, she came to me first. And then, she asked me that "Do you have any plan after studying?, I'm going to lunch" When we had lunch together, she was laughing well different from her first impression. So, we got along with and started to date. I think it's not good to judge people based on first impressions. :)

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Hi, Eric!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille


Absolutely yes. 
>> CORRECT!
I've ever experienced it. 
>> CORRECT!
That's my third ex-girlfriend. 
>> CORRECT!
When I studied TOEIC, I had a group to study. 
>> CORRECT!
And, I met her there.
>> CORRECT!
 She looked very cold, high-eyed, and expressionless at the first time. 
>> CORRECT!
But, she came to me first. 
>> CORRECT!
And then, she asked me that "Do you have any plan after studying?, I'm going to lunch" 
>> CORRECT!
When we had lunch together, she was laughing well, different from her first impression. 
>> CORRECT!
So, we got along with and started to date. 
>> So, we got along with each other and started to date. 
I think it's not good to judge people based on first impressions. :)
>> CORRECT!

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