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Use my know-how

작성자: 임*진
2024-03-14 1040

회원님의 영작문

In fact, every bad experience was eventually beautified and left some of lessons and realizations.
Thus, I want to focus on best experiences of acceptance that I'm having in my worklife.
I'm used to establishing strategies, researching the markets and drawing some insights by working at a strategic consulting firm before.
Whenever I participate in team meeting, I suggest my opinions using know-how which is gotten in previous experiences.
For example, when I claim the opinion related to entering into new market, I comment partnerships, support policies and expected effects.
This approach was often accepted among team members and I was in charge of setting an entire storyline of strategy.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Ms. Yu Jin! Your ability to turn challenges into valuable lessons is inspiring. Your strategic approach in team meetings based on past experiences is making a real impact. Keep up the great work!
~T. Jenna

In fact, every bad experience was eventually beautified and left some of lessons and realizations.
>>In fact, every bad experience is eventually beautified and leaves some lessons and realizations.
OR
>>In fact, every bad experience can eventually be seen as a valuable lesson, leaving us with realizations.
Thus, I want to focus on best experiences of acceptance that I'm having in my worklife.
Correct, or
>>Therefore, I aim to emphasize the best experiences of acceptance that I am encountering in my professional life.
I'm used to establishing strategies, researching the markets and drawing some insights by working at a strategic consulting firm before.
Correct, or
>>Prior to this, I honed my skills in strategy establishment, market research, and insight generation during my tenure at a strategic consulting firm.
Whenever I participate in team meeting, I suggest my opinions using know-how which is gotten in previous experiences.
>>Whenever I participate in team meetings, I suggest my opinions using the know-how acquired from previous experiences.
OR
>>During team meetings, I contribute by offering insights gleaned from my past experiences, enriching our discussions with valuable know-how.
For example, when I claim the opinion related to entering into new market, I comment partnerships, support policies and expected effects.
>>For example, when I express an opinion regarding entering a new market, I address partnerships, support policies, and expected effects.
This approach was often accepted among team members and I was in charge of setting an entire storyline of strategy.
>>This approach is often accepted among team members, and I am in charge of setting the entire storyline of the strategy.
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