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Hi. T.Donna.
First, I am sorry I couldn't attend the class this morning.
I went to bed late last night.
As I mentioned before, my wife and I visited a guitar shop today.
The manager there explained to us about guitars in detail.
Accoring to many professionals, there are two main brands in acoustic guitars; Martin and Taylor.
Thus, I asked him to let me hear both of the sound.
Interestingly, there was a distinct difference between two brands.
Taylor has a charming sound while Martin has a better balance.
I chose a Martin.
The expense was about four thousand dollars.
I was so happy to get a new excellent guitar and my wife shared my pleasure.
Guitar teacher was surpised to see my new guitar.
I let him to play it for a while, and he was satisfied with the sound.
He appreciated me to let him play my new guitar.
Regarding my homework, I want a doctor who is kind and has a good empathy.
However, I am not sure if I can choose a good doctor.
Only God knows who he or she is.
See you tomorrow.

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Hello, Dr. Kim!

I think you had such a great time with your wife choosing the perfect guitar for you to practice on your skills. I honestly have not realized the differences of guitar sounds when I hear them in the events where bands play. Since you told me about the distinction about the two major competing brands, I will ask my friends soon on which they prefer. It would be interesting to find out.

I hope that your Martin guitar will elevate your guitar playing experience and inspire you to strum on only very good music. Of course, maintenance of this instrument is also crucial in having it for a long time.

Meanwhile, there are just a few details left before you can present the contract agreement with Dr. MJ. After this, you can start finding the next best doctor to assist you in your clinic. This may be another challenge but I am pretty sure that there are many good doctors out there. God will send one to your doorsteps soon.

I am grateful for your journal sharing through this composition. Your mastery in grammar is always evident and your vocabulary continuously grows each time. Well done!

See you in class.

-T. Donna~

Hi. T.Donna.
>> Correct!

First, I am sorry I couldn't attend the class this morning.
>> Correct!

I went to bed late last night.
>> Correct!

As I mentioned before, my wife and I visited a guitar shop today.
>> Correct!

The manager there explained to us about guitars in detail.
>> Correct!

Accoring to many professionals, there are two main brands in acoustic guitars; Martin and Taylor.
>> Correct!

Thus, I asked him to let me hear both of the sound.
>> Thus, I asked him to let me hear both of the sounds.

Interestingly, there was a distinct difference between two brands.
>> Correct!
Or: Interestingly, there was a distinct difference between the two brands.

Taylor has a charming sound while Martin has a better balance.
>> Correct!

I chose a Martin.
>> I chose Martin.

The expense was about four thousand dollars.
>> Correct!

I was so happy to get a new excellent guitar and my wife shared my pleasure.
>> Correct!

Guitar teacher was surpised to see my new guitar.
>> The guitar teacher was surprised to see my new guitar.

I let him to play it for a while, and he was satisfied with the sound.
>> I let him play it for a while, and he was satisfied with the sound.

He appreciated me to let him play my new guitar.
>> Correct!

Regarding my homework, I want a doctor who is kind and has a good empathy.
>> Correct!

However, I am not sure if I can choose a good doctor.
>> Correct!

Only God knows who he or she is.
>> Correct!

See you tomorrow.
>> Correct!
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