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Honestly, I didn't read books because I didn't care about the environment.

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Hi Conan!
This sentence is correct if you are talking about the past.
However, if the idea that you want to get across is general, we have to change the verb tense.
We have to change it to simple present tense.
I will explain more tomorrow.
See you then!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
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