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The good things about my job
1. There is no overtime and the workload is not excessive.
2. It's good that the commute time is accurate.
3. There is a private partition inside the office, so you can work without anyone noticing and the work environment is good.
4. You are free to spend your time outside during lunch time.
5. You can work comfortably indoors even in the heat and extreme cold.

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Well done, Mia! You were able to give specific examples of the great things about your work! ^^

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The good things about my job

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>> These are the good things about my job.

1. There is no overtime and the workload is not excessive.

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>> 1. We don¡¯t need to render extra hours, and the workload is just right.

2. It's good that the commute time is accurate.

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>> It¡¯s beneficial that the distance to my workplace is near, and the commute time is just right.

3. There is a private partition inside the office, so you can work without anyone noticing and the work environment is good.

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>> There are partitions in the office, so you have privacy while working, and the working environment is good.

4. You are free to spend your time outside during lunch time.

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>> You are free to spend your time outside during your break time.

5. You can work comfortably indoors even in the heat and extreme cold.

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>> You can work comfortably even in hot or cold weather.


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