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My fashion style usually wears gray and black.
But in the summer, I wear pastel-toned clothes such as
light yellow, light purple, light pink, and sky bllue.
I think I wear almost all of my clothes in achromatic colors.
What color do you wear in the summer?

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                             What's your fashion style or your taste in fashion? Describe it.



My fashion style usually wears gray and black.
>> I have a classic fashion style because I usually wear gray and black. 

But in the summer, I wear pastel-toned clothes such as
light yellow, light purple, light pink, and sky bllue.
>> But in the summer, I wear pastel-toned clothes, such as light yellow, light purple, light pink, and sky blue.

I think I wear almost all of my clothes in achromatic colors.
>> CORRECT~~

What color do you wear in the summer?
>> What color or colors do you wear in the summer?
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