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Should we always do our best in everything that we do?

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I think we should always do our best in everything that we do.
Because you don't know when your lucky opportunity will come.
If you always ddo your best in everything, I think you will meet a lucky opportunity like destiny.
Also, always doing my best in everything can make me a industrious person to someone.
Korea prefers industrious people, so if you look industrious to someone, you may be able to create opportunities.
For example, there is a famous anecdote in which the chairman of a Korean well-known company was impressed by the scene of a cleaning lady who infiltrated undercover and worked diligently, so she hired as a full-time employee of the company and even provided incentives.

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Hello, Yun!
You were correct in saying that we should constantly give our best in all we do since we never know when our luck or opportunity will come. On the other side, I regretted several occasions where I gave my best because I realized it wasn't worth it. So I'd like to emphasize that we should always be conscious of what we are putting our best into. :))
Chammy
I think we should always do our best in everything that we do.
Because you don't know when your lucky opportunity will come.
>>Correct
If you always ddo your best in everything, I think you will meet a lucky opportunity like destiny.
>>If you always do your best in everything, I think you will meet a lucky opportunity like destiny.
Also, always doing my best in everything can make me a industrious person to someone.
>>Also, always doing my best in everything can make me an industrious person to someone.
Korea prefers industrious people, so if you look industrious to someone, you may be able to create opportunities.
>>Correct
For example, there is a famous anecdote in which the chairman of a Korean well-known company was impressed by the scene of a cleaning lady who infiltrated undercover and worked diligently
>>Correct
so she hired as a full-time employee of the company and even provided incentives.
>> So she was hired as a full-time employee of the company and even provided incentives.
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