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The difficulty of raising a pet was training to cover feces and urine. Here are some ways I can train Marong at home. All the ways I trained Marongi were watching videos of YouTube dog trainers and imitating her. First, I organized all the carpets in my house in the closet before training to cover my dog's poop and pee. Then, I placed several pads, and gave Marong a meal or a snack, complimenting her when she peed on the pads. Second, it is training to wait until the owner orders it. It is training to eat when the owner says "eat" while waiting while waiting even though there is something to eat right in front of you. Third, giving kisses to the owner, high-fiving with hands, sitting down or lying down.

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Wow! Marong is so cute! Thank you for sending a picture of her, Mia.   I agree with you. Cleaning feces and urine is the most difficult part of raising a pet.
-Khai

The difficulty of raising a pet was training to cover feces and urine.

>> CORRECT

OR

>> Cleaning the feces and urine is part of the difficulty of raising a pet.

Here are some ways I can train Marong at home.

>> CORRECT

OR

>> Here are some ways that I trained Marong at home.

All the ways I trained Marongi were watching videos of YouTube dog trainers and imitating her.

>> All the ways I trained Marongi were by watching videos of YouTube dog trainers and imitating her.

First, I organized all the carpets in my house in the closet before training to cover my dog's poop and pee.

>> CORRECT

OR

>> First, I kept all the carpets in my house before training to teach my dog where to poop and pee.

Then, I placed several pads, and gave Marong a meal or a snack, complimenting her when she peed on the pads. 

>> Then, I placed several pads and gave Marong a meal or a snack, complimenting her when she peed on the pads. 

Second, it is training to wait until the owner orders it.

>> CORRECT

It is training to eat when the owner says "eat" while waiting while waiting even though there is something to eat right in front of you. 

>> It is training to eat when the owner says "eat" while waiting, even though there is something to eat right in front of you. 

Third, giving kisses to the owner, high-fiving with hands, sitting down or lying down.

>> CORRECT

OR

>> Third are gestures such as giving kisses to the owner, doing high-fives, sitting down, or lying down.


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