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Usually I work half weekends and relax half weekends.

Because If I relax app weekend, I will have difficulty next week.

Wspecially I should be prepared on the weekend for grudation school lectures.

I lecture every Thursday after work.

So I need a weekend for my life.

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Ms. Lily!
Thank you for this. You are the type of person who thinks the weekend is not completed if there is no "work" involved, well, there are people like you. They just enjoy the weekend on Sunday.
Have a great weekend!
Aki~

Usually I work half weekends and relax half weekends.
>>> I usually work half weekends and relax half weekends.

Because If I relax app weekend, I will have difficulty next week.
>>> Because If I relax totally on the weekend, I will have difficulty next week.

Wspecially I should be prepared on the weekend for grudation school lectures.
>>> Especially I should be prepared on the weekend for graduation school lectures.

I lecture every Thursday after work.
>>> I do a lecture every Thursday after work.

So I need a weekend for my life.
>>> CORRECT!
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