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Ms. Sunny!
I would like to give you additional information about EVERYONE vs ANYONE ;
Everyone¡± refers to every one of the group of people you are talking about. ¡°Anyone¡± refers to any one particular individual out of the group of people you are talking about. Let's talk about that when you get back.
T. Aki~

Everyone can have their own business.
>> CORRECT! 
>>> Anyone can have their own business.

But most of them can¡¯t make a lot of money.
>>> CORRECT!

Business is adventure.
>>> Business is an adventure.

It should be followed lucky with their talent.
>>> CORRECT!

If you have excellent skill than others have.
>>> If you have more excellent skills than others.

You should try it. But generally you had better get a job using your skill.
>>> You should try it. But generally,  you had better get a job using your skills.

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