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Describe the last concert that you went to

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Korean cities hold various festivals to suit each city's characteristics every year.
The city I live in has a very old temporary palace and fortress that are registered as UNESCO World Heritage Sites.
The temporary palace and fortress are always crowded with many domestic and foreign tourists.
Every November, my city holds various cultural events such as plays, exhibitions, parades every november and on the evening of the last day of November, my city's orchestra and choir jointly hold a concert on the large lawn in front of the fortress.
I watched the concert with my parents and two daughters last November, and I can't forget the touching melody played by the orchestra, the fortress shining in the colorful lights and the crowd.
And I feel good because I think I gave wonderful memories to my parents from far away.

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Happy Thursday, Sun! 

Enjoy your day and see you in class tomorrow! 

- Kristine ^^ 

Korean cities hold various festivals to suit each city's characteristics every year.
>> Correct.
The city I live in has a very old temporary palace and fortress that are registered as UNESCO World Heritage Sites.
>> Correct. 
Or >> A very old temporary palace and fortress in the city where I live are recognized as UNESCO World Heritage Sites.
The temporary palace and fortress are always crowded with many domestic and foreign tourists.
>> Correct. 
Every November, my city holds various cultural events such as plays, exhibitions, parades every november and on the evening of the last day of November, my city's orchestra and choir jointly hold a concert on the large lawn in front of the fortress.
>> Every November, my city holds various cultural events such as plays, exhibitions, and parades.
>> The orchestra and choir of my city collaborate to perform a concert on the vast lawn in front of the fortress on the evening of the last day of November.  
I watched the concert with my parents and two daughters last November, and I can't forget the touching melody played by the orchestra, the fortress shining in the colorful lights and the crowd.
>> I watched the concert with my parents and two daughters last November, and I can't forget the touching melody played by the orchestra, the fortress shining in the colorful lights, and the crowd.
And I feel good because I think I gave wonderful memories to my parents from far away.
>> And it makes me happy to think that I brought my parents beautiful memories.
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