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Homelessness in our country is not so severe as other countries. We can hardly see the homeless except for some areas of Seoul. The homeless usually stay in the subway station of the Seoul Station or the City Hall Station. Near that areas, there are some free food providers for them.

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Happy Thursday, Gi Yean!
It's nice to know that there are not a lot of homeless people in Korea. It's just sad when we think about the reality that there can never be no homeless people in any country.
- T. Caitlyn
Homelessness in our country is not so severe as other countries. 
>> CORRECT
We can hardly see the homeless except for some areas of Seoul. 
>> CORRECT
The homeless usually stay in the subway station of the Seoul Station or the City Hall Station. 
>> CORRECT
Near that areas, there are some free food providers for them.
>> Near those areas, there are some free food providers for them.
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