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What fun things do you enjoy doing when you\'re on vacation?

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When I'm on vacation, I like to stay in hotel and relax. It's different to relax at home and hotel room. For now, there's nothing special that I want to do during vacation and I just want to experience as much as I can. Recently, I had vacation to hot spring resort located in Cheonan, South Korea. In there, our family relaxed in hotel room after doing hot spring. We ate tacos there and it was delicious and interesting.

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Hi Seong Eun, 

Thank you for sharing your vacation experiences! Staying in a hotel room during a getaway indeed offers a different kind of relaxation. The cozy ambiance, fresh linens, and perhaps a view of the surroundings make it a special experience. 

Tacos! They¡¯re like little flavor fiestas wrapped in a tortillaIt¡¯s fantastic that you got to enjoy them during your trip. Food has a magical way of adding joy to our adventures, doesn¡¯t it? 

As you continue to explore and experience more during your vacations, remember that each moment contributes to your treasure trove of memories. Whether it¡¯s savoring a delicious meal, soaking in a hot spring, or simply taking in the sights, every little detail counts. 

Keep embracing those delightful moments, Seong Eun! And who knows, maybe your next vacation will bring even more exciting surprises.  

Wishing you many more happy travels and unforgettable experiences! 

~Teacher Cathy 

 

When I'm on vacation, I like to stay in hotel and relax.  

>>When I'm on vacation, I like to stay in the hotel and relax. 

It's different to relax at home and hotel room.  

>>CORRECT 

OR>>Relaxing at home and in a hotel room is different. 

For now, there's nothing special that I want to do during vacation and I just want to experience as much as I can.  

>>CORRECT 

OR>>As for today, there's nothing specific that I would like to do on vacation. I just want to experience as much as I can. 

Recently, I had vacation to hot spring resort located in Cheonan, South Korea.  

>>Recently, I had a vacation at a hot spring resort located in Cheonan, South Korea.  

In there, our family relaxed in hotel room after doing hot spring.  

>>There, our family relaxed in the hotel room after going in the hot spring. 

We ate tacos there and it was delicious and interesting. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>We ate tacos there; it was tasty and the vacation was interesting. 

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