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What are some common barriers that prevent people from learning new skills and knowledge?

작성자: 박*호
2024-03-05 654

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I believe that the obstacles to people learning new skills and knowledge lie within themselves.
The first obstacle is lack of confidence.
There is a saying that Napoleon is said to have said.
Impossible is not in my dictionary.
If you have the confidence to accomplish anything, you can take on the challenge of learning new skills and knowledge.
The second is the fear of failure.
Success and failure are common in challenges.
There are many people who want to succeed but are unable to take on bold challenges because they are afraid of failure.
Please keep in mind the saying that failure is the mother of success.
The third is getting older.
It is true that as you get older, taking on new challenges becomes more difficult.
However, although learning is possible if you have a strong passion, too many people give up thinking it is too late to learn something new.
It's never too late to take on a challenge.
I believe that people should not stop learning until they die.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Good day, Sun! 

Many barriers, including personal, environmental, and situational factors, can be an obstacle for a person to learn. Identifying and overcoming these barriers is crucial for individuals to reach their full potential and achieve their goals. Understanding these barriers can help us a lot. 

- Kristine ^^ 

I believe that the obstacles to people learning new skills and knowledge lie within themselves.
>> Correct. 
The first obstacle is lack of confidence.
>> Correct. 
Or >> The first barrier is lack of self-assurance.
There is a saying that Napoleon is said to have said.
>> Correct. 
Impossible is not in my dictionary.
>> Correct. 
If you have the confidence to accomplish anything, you can take on the challenge of learning new skills and knowledge.
>> Correct. 
The second is the fear of failure.
>> Correct. 
Success and failure are common in challenges.
>> Success and failure are common challenges.
There are many people who want to succeed but are unable to take on bold challenges because they are afraid of failure.
>> Correct. 
Please keep in mind the saying that failure is the mother of success.
>> Remember the proverb that says "failure is the mother of success."
The third is getting older.
>> Correct. 
It is true that as you get older, taking on new challenges becomes more difficult.
>> It's true that taking on new challenges gets harder as you get older.
However, although learning is possible if you have a strong passion, too many people give up thinking it is too late to learn something new.
>> On the other hand, if you have a strong passion, learning is possible. Too many people give up because they believe it is too late to learn something new.
It's never too late to take on a challenge.
>> Correct. 
I believe that people should not stop learning until they die.
>> Correct. 
Or >> I believe that people should never stop learning until they die.

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