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Compare living with roommates with living alone. Which living arrangement do you think is better and

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I absolutely prefer living along right now. I have been living with roommates during semester because I live at the dorm. Four live in the one room where it only has two of bunk beds, small sink and wardroves. Anyways, I experience many inconvenience with my rommates because we are different everything. Especially, some friends who have no consideration are aweful to me. They set the alarm off at dawn for waking up early but they don't wake up, instead I lay awake before the time which I usually wake up. It's annoying me every single morning. Also, they bring many friends to my room to have time with their friends. Sometime, I have difficulty to sleep because fo them. However, some peoples are nice to me and good but I recommended living alone.



( I can't see skepe message. I will call next week, not this week !)

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Hi Sarah! I understand your situation. I hope you enjoy your first week in school. See you soon!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^


I absolutely prefer living along right now.
>> I absolutely prefer living alone right now.

I have been living with roommates during semester because I live at the dorm.
>> During the semester, I've been residing in a dormitory with roommates.

Four live in the one room where it only has two of bunk beds, small sink and wardroves.
>>There are four of us sharing a single room, which is equipped with only two bunk beds, a small sink, and wardrobes.

Anyways, I experience many inconvenience with my rommates because we are different everything.
>> However, living with roommates has been inconvenient for me due to our differences.

Especially, some friends who have no consideration are aweful to me.
>> Some of my friends, in particular, lack consideration and have been awful to me.

They set the alarm off at dawn for waking up early but they don't wake up, instead I lay awake before the time which I usually wake up.
>> They frequently set alarms for early morning wake-ups but fail to actually wake up, leaving me to lie awake before my usual waking time.

It's annoying me every single morning.
>> This has been annoying me every single morning. 

Also, they bring many friends to my room to have time with their friends.
>> Additionally, they often bring many friends into our room, disrupting my ability to sleep. 

Sometime, I have difficulty to sleep because fo them. However, some peoples are nice to me and good but I recommended living alone.
>> However, there are some individuals who are nice to me and pleasant, but overall, I would recommend living alone.

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