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K-pop is popular all over the world, but it is hard for me as a Korean to realize it.
As a Korean, I am not very enthusiastic about the genre of K-pop.

A few years ago before pandemic, I volunteered at a Korean language school in Russia and realized the popularity of Korean culture.
I taught Korean language and culture to teenage students for 10 days.
It is said that all the students in the Korean language school loved Korean culture and began to learn Korean.
Interest in the genre of K-pop continued to K-dramas, Korean language, and Korean makeup.
And I recently got a DM from a student at that time that she chose Korean major and came to Korea as an exchange student.

As such, a heated interest in not only K-pop but also certain things can be influential enough to change someone's career path.

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Hi Goeun,

Your assignment on the impact of K-pop abroad is insightful. It's fascinating how Korean culture, including K-pop, has gained popularity worldwide.

Your experience volunteering at a Korean language school in Russia highlights the widespread appeal of Korean culture. It's remarkable to see how your efforts in teaching Korean language and culture have inspired students to pursue further studies and even travel to Korea.

Your story underscores the profound influence of K-pop and other aspects of Korean culture beyond entertainment, impacting individuals' career choices and life paths. Good job with your homework, keep up the great work!

~Teacher Cathy

 

K-pop is popular all over the world, but it is hard for me as a Korean to realize it.

>>CORRECT

OR>>K-pop is popular worldwide, but as a Korean, it's difficult for me to fully grasp its global impact.

As a Korean, I am not very enthusiastic about the genre of K-pop.

>>CORRECT

OR>>As a Korean, I'm not particularly enthusiastic about K-pop.

A few years ago before pandemic, I volunteered at a Korean language school in Russia and realized the popularity of Korean culture.

>>A few years ago before the pandemic, I volunteered at a Korean language school in Russia and realized the popularity of Korean culture.

I taught Korean language and culture to teenage students for 10 days.

>>CORRECT

OR>>I taught Korean language and culture to teenagers for 10 days.

It is said that all the students in the Korean language school loved Korean culture and began to learn Korean.

>>CORRECT

OR>>All students at the Korean language school are said to have developed a fondness for Korean culture and started learning the language.

Interest in the genre of K-pop continued to K-dramas, Korean language, and Korean makeup.

>>Interest in the genre of K-pop continued with K-dramas, Korean language, and Korean makeup.

And I recently got a DM from a student at that time that she chose Korean major and came to Korea as an exchange student.

>>I recently got a DM from a student at that time that she chose a Korean major and came to Korea as an exchange student.

As such, a heated interest in not only K-pop but also certain things can be influential enough to change someone's career path.

>>CORRECT

OR>>Therefore, a strong passion for not just K-pop, but also various other aspects, can have a significant impact on altering one's career trajectory.

 

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