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What are the positive and negative ways some people choose to deal with stress?

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Positive ways help lives better, otherwise negative ways don't. There are doing some exercise, playing instruments and thinking about the source of stress and trying to solve it in positive ways. On the other hand, there are eating too much and letting themselves in stressful situation eventhough they can do something about it are included in negative ways.

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Good morning, Seong Eun!
I am glad that you still have your final homework.
Take note, in everything you do, you should be enjoying them and you were not forced to do such things or activities.
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Positive ways help lives better, otherwise negative ways don't.
>>> CORRECT!

There are doing some exercise, playing instruments and thinking about the source of stress and trying to solve it in positive ways.
>>> They are doing some exercise, playing instruments thinking about the source of stress, and trying to solve it in positive ways.


On the other hand, there are eating too much and letting themselves in stressful situation eventhough they can do something about it are included in negative ways.
>>>  On the other hand, some are eating too much and letting themselves in stressful situations even though they can do something about it are included in negative ways.

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