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Compare traveling alone with traveling with friends or family. Which do you enjoy more and why?

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I think I prefer to travel alone than with friends or family. I have been on a trip with both but I felt more comfortable alone. Actually, I don't think I'm lonely when I have a trip alone. I don't have to care about my tripmate's preference while traveling. I just take care of myself and my preference. I can decide the plan what I want to do on a trip and fill with my favorite things. Also It's a good travel to think more about me. I don't want to conflict with family and friends on a trip because I don't want to grow apart after I finish my trip. Furthermore, I feel little bit uncomfortable when I'm with people whole day because It makes me exhausted. However, If I go traveling with my friends or family, I can talk and take a picture with them. I can share the food, experience and a lot of things about travel with trip mate. In fact, I like both of case if I can go on a trip !!

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Sarah! It's really so much better to make your own decisions when it comes to traveling. You wouldn't have to think about other people.
~~Teacher Ryka^^


I think I prefer to travel alone than with friends or family. 
>>> I prefer traveling alone rather than with friends or family.

I have been on a trip with both but I felt more comfortable alone. 
>>> I've been on trips with both, but I've felt more comfortable alone.

Actually, I don't think I'm lonely when I have a trip alone. 
>>> Actually, I don't feel lonely when I travel alone.

I don't have to care about my tripmate's preference while traveling. 
>>> I don't have to consider my travel companions' preferences; instead, I can focus solely on myself and what I enjoy.

I just take care of myself and my preference. 
>>>  I can decide on the itinerary and fill it with my favorite activities. 

I can decide the plan what I want to do on a trip and fill with my favorite things. 
>>> Also, traveling alone allows me to focus on self-reflection.

Also It's a good travel to think more about me. 
>>> Additionally, traveling alone allows me to reflect more on myself, which I find beneficial. 

I don't want to conflict with family and friends on a trip because I don't want to grow apart after I finish my trip. 
>>> I prefer not to risk conflicts with family and friends during trips, as I want to maintain strong relationships even after the journey ends.

Furthermore, I feel little bit uncomfortable when I'm with people whole day because It makes me exhausted. 
>>> Furthermore, I tend to feel a bit exhausted when spending the entire day with others.

However, If I go traveling with my friends or family, I can talk and take a picture with them. 
>>> However, traveling with friends or family enables me to engage in conversations, take photos together, and share experiences and meals.

I can share the food, experience and a lot of things about travel with trip mate. In fact, I like both of case if I can go on a trip !!
>>> In reality, I enjoy both scenarios if I have the opportunity to travel!
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