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If you had $100,000, where would you go on vacation? Why?

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If I have $100,000, I hope to trip across west to east in the US by train. The train must be first class seat with bed in the private space.
Train travel is my bucket list for a long time. Because I can move and enjoy diverse scape without walking. During moving the train I'd like to take a rest alone, or write some essay to publish my book. When I feel boring, I'll drop by any city or village. Of caurse there are many countries where I can try train travel. I think US is best place to me. As I know season and nature art differant every area, I expect I can enjoy many things. And I can have small talk in english.

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Well done, Kyeong Yun! ^^ You have explained in detail what you will do when you receive $100,000 for traveling. Thank you for sharing with me one thing on your bucket list. ^^

-Khai

If I have $100,000, I hope to trip across west to east in the US by train.
>> If I have $100,000, I hope to travel west to east in the US by train.
The train must be first class seat with bed in the private space.
>> The train must have a first class seat with a bed in the private space.
Train travel is my bucket list for a long time.
>> Train travel has been on my bucket list for a long time.
Because I can move and enjoy diverse scape without walking.
>> It is because I can move and enjoy a diverse escape without walking.
During moving the train I'd like to take a rest alone, or write some essay to publish my book.
>> While riding the train, I'd like to take a rest alone or write an essay to publish my book.
When I feel boring, I'll drop by any city or village.
>> When I feel bored, I'll drop by any city or village.
Of caurse there are many countries where I can try train travel. 
>> Of course, there are many countries where I can try to travel by train.
I think US is best place to me.
>> I think the US is the best place for me.
As I know season and nature art differant every area, I expect I can enjoy many things.
>> As I know that seasons and nature art differ in every area, I expect to enjoy many things.
And I can have small talk in english.

>> And I can have small talk in English.


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