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Seoul was so big and complicated. Where ever I go, there were always high buildings, wide roads and many people so it doesn't feel like somewhere people live in.There were houses even in stiff hills. But there were also many thing to see. Maybe I felt these things clearly because I live in Daejeon which is famous for not interesting but good to live.

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Good day, Seong Eun!
It's good to know that you got the experience of going to different cities, especially in Seoul. People have the same impression whenever they visit a famous city. and it's really nice to look back on your first "touch down" experience :)
 Have a good day!
T. Aki~

Seoul was so big and complicated.
>>>  Seoul was so big and complicated the first time I went there.
>>> Seoul is so big and complicated.

Where ever I go, there were always high buildings, wide roads and many people so it doesn't feel like somewhere people live in.
>>>  Wherever I go, there are always high buildings, wide roads and many people so it doesn't feel like somewhere people live in.

There were houses even in stiff hills.
>>> There were houses even on stiff hills. 

But there were also many thing to see
>>> But there were also many things to see

 Maybe I felt these things clearly because I live in Daejeon which is famous for not interesting but good to live.
>>>  Maybe I felt these things clearly because I live in Daejeon which is famous for not being interesting but good to live.
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