¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽŠ³»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

My bravest momnet

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ÀÌ*À±
2024-02-29 522

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®



So sorry.....
too long my homework again....
attach text file.
have a nice day!

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Yun, you demonstrated incredible bravery!
Whatever you overcome, to me, demonstrates how brave you are... Doing things that do not interest you or that you are unfamiliar with can be part of it. And I hope we will always choose to face and overcome fears rather than keep them within us. ^_____^

Chammy

There seem to be three bravest moments.

First, I think it was about going into the gost house of the amusement park.

>>First, I think it was about going into the ghost house of the amusement park.

Actually, I don't like scary everythings.

>>Actually, I don't like everything scary

But I don't know what I was thinking, but I wanted to go into the gost house and led my dad, who hates it, into the gost house.

>> But I don't know what I was thinking, but I wanted to go into the ghost house and led my dad, who hates it, too.

Contrary to my thinking, I immediately dropped down to the ground and cried as soon as I entered, and my dad dragged me out in an angry state.

>>Correct

In back again thinking, it was a funny situation, but think it was a moment when I acted bravely.

>> Looking back again, I think it was a funny situation, but it was a moment when I acted bravely.

Second, it was about when I took a year off from my university.

At that time, taking a break from university became a trend, so my friends around me were resting.

>>Correct

I gave a presentation about my a year plan to my parents who ould be worried after thinking for a long time without getting caught up in the trend.

>>I gave a presentation about my year plan to my parents who could be worried after thinking for a long time without getting caught up in the trend.

Thanks to that, I was able to take a leave of absence with the consent of my parents.

Finally, it's all my moments to be brave in the future.

I think I'm getting braver as I get older.

So, I think my bravest moment will change in the future.

Isn't it a brave act to learn English right now by speaking Power English?

>>Correct

In the future, it will do brave to apply for a job without many worrying boldly.

>>In the future, it will be brave to apply for a job without much fear.


¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
135727 What does success mean to you, and how do you plan to reach it? À±*¿ø ¿Ï·á 2024-03-21 0
135726 What are some manners from the past that are rarely or never... ½Å*¼· ¿Ï·á 2024-03-21 2799
135725 Have you ever experienced culture shock? ¹Ú*È£ ¿Ï·á 2024-03-21 488
135724 Who is your favorite actor/actress? Why do you like him/her? ±è*¾Æ ¿Ï·á 2024-03-21 531
135723 homework ÀÌ*¼ö ¿Ï·á 2024-03-21 306
135722 food ±Ç*Èñ ¿Ï·á 2024-03-21 407
135721 Answer the homework Á¤*¼· ¿Ï·á 2024-03-21 534
135720 What is your favorite hobby, and why do you enjoy it? Describe... Ȳ*Àº ¿Ï·á 2024-03-21 594
135719 Who amongst the four people in the sample situations can you... ¼Û*Áø ¿Ï·á 2024-03-21 2
135718 A piece of advice to my husband ¾ç*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2024-03-21 344
135717 20.Mar.2024 ±è*Á¤ ¿Ï·á 2024-03-21 0
135716 What is the importance of friends? ¿À*¼Ò ¿Ï·á 2024-03-21 1
135715 homework ÀÓ*¹Î ¿Ï·á 2024-03-21 303
135714 homework ¹Ú*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2024-03-21 301
135713 Which one is better, too confident or nervous but prepared? ÀÌ*À± ¿Ï·á 2024-03-21 367
135712 homework À¯*¸° ¿Ï·á 2024-03-20 331
135711 Where do you usually buy your clothes? How often do you buy new... ±è*¼ø ¿Ï·á 2024-03-20 306
135710 homework 03.20 ÃÖ*Ç ¿Ï·á 2024-03-20 409
135709 Homework Àå*Çõ ¿Ï·á 2024-03-20 329
135708 Homework ¹Ú*Çý ¿Ï·á 2024-03-20 263

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ Ķ¸°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öÆ° Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽŠ±ÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î ÇÏ°í ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04