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We already have provincial hospitals in each province.

The problem is that most people prefer to see a doctors big hospitals in Seoul.

Even provincial hospitals suffer from financial difficulities and increase some clinics and hospitals become closed down.

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Good day, Ms. Lily!
Thank you for this! Are the facilities in provincial hospitals not enough that make people go and see doctors in Seoul? 
Let's talk about it later.
Aki~

We already have provincial hospitals in each province.
>>> CORRECT!

The problem is that most people prefer to see a doctors big hospitals in Seoul.
>>> The problem is that most people prefer to see a doctor in big hospitals in Seoul.

Even provincial hospitals suffer from financial difficulities and increase some clinics and hospitals become closed down.
>>>  Even provincial hospitals suffer from financial difficulties and some clinics and hospitals closed down.
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