¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽŠ³»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

The importance of body language

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ÀÓ*Áø
2024-02-27 708

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

Body language is crucial to understand sentences smoothly and deliver emotions naturally.
Especially, body language is really effective when we visit other nations, which is using other language.
Even if we can't be good at explaining the exact word, we can express our opinions by using gestures and facial expressions.
As far as we live in connected society offering similar life style, we can communicate with people with simple description.
When I traveled abroad with my sister, she has broken the cup in a café.
Even though, She was not good at speaking English, she apolozied for her mistake to server by just the word 'cup' and 'sorry' and gestures expressing the situation that the cup had been broken.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Hi, Ms. Yu Jin! Indeed, body language is vital for smooth communication and expressing emotions, especially when in foreign countries. Even without mastering a language, gestures and facial expressions enable us to convey thoughts effectively. Your sister's experience breaking a cup in a café abroad illustrates the power of simple gestures and a few words to overcome language barriers in our connected world. Thankyou for this composition.

Body language is crucial to understand sentences smoothly and deliver emotions naturally.
Correct, or
>>Body language is crucial for understanding sentences smoothly and delivering emotions naturally.
Especially, body language is really effective when we visit other nations, which is using other language.
>>Especially, body language is highly effective when we visit other nations where a different language is spoken.
Even if we can't be good at explaining the exact word, we can express our opinions by using gestures and facial expressions.
Correct, or
>> Even if we can't articulate the exact word well, we can express our opinions using gestures and facial expressions.
As far as we live in connected society offering similar life style, we can communicate with people with simple description.
>>As long as we live in a connected society offering a similar lifestyle, we can communicate with people using simple descriptions
When I traveled abroad with my sister, she has broken the cup in a cafe.
>>When I traveled abroad with my sister, she has broken a cup in a cafe.
OR
>>When I traveled abroad with my sister, she broke a cup in a cafe.
Even though, She was not good at speaking English, she apolozied for her mistake to server by just the word 'cup' and 'sorry' and gestures expressing the situation that the cup had been broken.
>>Even though she was not good at speaking English, she apologized to the server with just the words 'cup' and 'sorry,' along with gestures expressing the situation that the cup had been broken.
¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
132469 Tell something about the housework that you usually do in... ÀÌ*ÁØ ¿Ï·á 2023-11-16 1624
132468 What do you like most about your bedroom? Answer in no more than... ÀÌ*ºó ¿Ï·á 2023-11-16 1117
132467 How do long distance relations last? ÀÌ*ºó ¿Ï·á 2023-11-16 1664
132466 Share a thing that never fails to make you smile. ÀÌ*À± ¿Ï·á 2023-11-16 1790
132465 homework ±è*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2023-11-15 1587
132464 What is the most recognized symbol you know? Write something... ¿À*Çõ ¿Ï·á 2023-11-15 1
132463 Homework ±è*¼­ ¿Ï·á 2023-11-15 3
132462 Homework ±è*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2023-11-15 1536
132461 homework ÃÖ*Ç ¿Ï·á 2023-11-15 1794
132460 My wish ¼Û*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2023-11-15 621
132459 homework ÀÌ*¼÷ ¿Ï·á 2023-11-15 2329
132458 Should schools have more field trips? Why? ÀÓ*È£ ¿Ï·á 2023-11-15 1344
132457 Feeling pressure about my future ÀÌ*¼Ö ¿Ï·á 2023-11-15 1376
132456 Do you like playing sports? ±Ç*¸ð ¿Ï·á 2023-11-15 1428
132455 In English, there are sick jokes, private jokes, cruel jokes,... ¿¡*¹Ì ¿Ï·á 2023-11-15 3
132454 HOMEWORK: Please write a short paragraph about \"Do you still... ¾Ù* ¿Ï·á 2023-11-15 0
132453 homework Á¤*È£ ¿Ï·á 2023-11-15 0
132452 Homework ±è* ¿Ï·á 2023-11-15 0
132451 I like almost all kinds of dishes. À±*Çý ¿Ï·á 2023-11-15 1773
132450 Homework Á¤*ȯ ¿Ï·á 2023-11-15 2

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ Ķ¸°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öÆ° Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽŠ±ÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î ÇÏ°í ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04