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The importance of body language

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Body language is crucial to understand sentences smoothly and deliver emotions naturally.
Especially, body language is really effective when we visit other nations, which is using other language.
Even if we can't be good at explaining the exact word, we can express our opinions by using gestures and facial expressions.
As far as we live in connected society offering similar life style, we can communicate with people with simple description.
When I traveled abroad with my sister, she has broken the cup in a café.
Even though, She was not good at speaking English, she apolozied for her mistake to server by just the word 'cup' and 'sorry' and gestures expressing the situation that the cup had been broken.

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Hi, Ms. Yu Jin! Indeed, body language is vital for smooth communication and expressing emotions, especially when in foreign countries. Even without mastering a language, gestures and facial expressions enable us to convey thoughts effectively. Your sister's experience breaking a cup in a café abroad illustrates the power of simple gestures and a few words to overcome language barriers in our connected world. Thankyou for this composition.

Body language is crucial to understand sentences smoothly and deliver emotions naturally.
Correct, or
>>Body language is crucial for understanding sentences smoothly and delivering emotions naturally.
Especially, body language is really effective when we visit other nations, which is using other language.
>>Especially, body language is highly effective when we visit other nations where a different language is spoken.
Even if we can't be good at explaining the exact word, we can express our opinions by using gestures and facial expressions.
Correct, or
>> Even if we can't articulate the exact word well, we can express our opinions using gestures and facial expressions.
As far as we live in connected society offering similar life style, we can communicate with people with simple description.
>>As long as we live in a connected society offering a similar lifestyle, we can communicate with people using simple descriptions
When I traveled abroad with my sister, she has broken the cup in a cafe.
>>When I traveled abroad with my sister, she has broken a cup in a cafe.
OR
>>When I traveled abroad with my sister, she broke a cup in a cafe.
Even though, She was not good at speaking English, she apolozied for her mistake to server by just the word 'cup' and 'sorry' and gestures expressing the situation that the cup had been broken.
>>Even though she was not good at speaking English, she apologized to the server with just the words 'cup' and 'sorry,' along with gestures expressing the situation that the cup had been broken.
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