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Have you ever had any memorable or funny moments while camping?

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I used to go camping often with my two children during summer vacation.
A memorable thing happened when my eldest seemed to be 7 years old and my youngest to be 4 years old.
When I was taking care of my children alone without my wife, set up a tent, cooked, and was about to have dinner with my children,
A middle-aged couple who were camping right next to us cooked delicious food and invited my family.
But my children didn't like going there, so they stayed in my tent and I went to the couple's tent.
After a lot of time eating with the couple, the woman told me to go to my tent quickly.
So I looked towards my tent and my eldest daughter was staring at me with her arms crossed in anger.
I hurried back and apologized.
my children were waiting without eating any food until then.
I didn't know that much time had passed in the tent and I forgot that only my children were left .
I was a immature novice dad.
Even now, sometimes when my children talk about it, I feel really ashamed.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hey, Sun! 

Thanks for sharing your story. See you tomorrow!

- Kristine ^^

I used to go camping often with my two children during summer vacation.
>> I used to spend a lot of time camping with my children during summer vacation.
A memorable thing happened when my eldest seemed to be 7 years old and my youngest to be 4 years old.
>> A memorable thing happened when my eldest was about 7 and my youngest was 4.
When I was taking care of my children alone without my wife, set up a tent, cooked, and was about to have dinner with my children,
>> As I set up a tent and prepared dinner for my children while taking caring of them without my wife. 
A middle-aged couple who were camping right next to us cooked delicious food and invited my family.
>> Correct. 
But my children didn't like going there, so they stayed in my tent and I went to the couple's tent.
>> However, my children refused to go there and stayed in the tent while I headed to the couple's tent.
After a lot of time eating with the couple, the woman told me to go to my tent quickly.
>> After we had a long meal together, a woman told me to get back to the tent quickly. 
So I looked towards my tent and my eldest daughter was staring at me with her arms crossed in anger.
>> As I took a peek at the tent, I saw my eldest daughter furiously glaring at me with her arms crossed.
I hurried back and apologized.
>> I ran back and apologized.
my children were waiting without eating any food until then.
>> Up until that point, my kids had not eaten anything.
I didn't know that much time had passed in the tent and I forgot that only my children were left .
>> I had no idea how much time had passed and I forget my children were left in the tent.
I was a immature novice dad.
>> I was a naive, immature father.
Even now, sometimes when my children talk about it, I feel really ashamed.
>> Even now, I still get embarrassed when my children talk about it.
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