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Discuss the pros and cons of using public transportation versus owning a car.

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2024-02-23 1757

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In the case of using public transportation, we don't have to experience in traffic jam. Sometime it's going to detination faster than a car. Also, It does cost some money to use public transportation more than a car because car is expensive to maintain. The cons is we have to wait it to take because it has different time coming. In addition, sometime we can't sit in a chair if there are many people in the public transportation. If it rains, furthermore, it's so terrible to take it. However, a car is convenient in challenging weather. We can go everywhere even the area has no the public transportation. The cons is it's difficult to park a car in spot where we want to go because the parking lot may not be there.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Sarah! Thank you so much for doing your best to share your opinion about this topic. 
~~Teacher Ryka^^


In the case of using public transportation, we don't have to experience in traffic jam.
>> When it comes to using public transportation, one of the key advantages is the avoidance of traffic jams, which can significantly reduce travel time compared to driving a car. 

Sometime it's going to detination faster than a car. 
>> Additionally, in some cases, public transportation can even get you to your destination faster than a car.

Also, It does cost some money to use public transportation more than a car because car is expensive to maintain. 
>> Another benefit is the lower maintenance cost compared to owning and maintaining a car, which can be quite expensive.

The cons is we have to wait it to take because it has different time coming. 
>> However, there are some drawbacks to consider. One downside is the need to adhere to the schedule of public transportation, which may involve waiting for its arrival. 

In addition, sometime we can't sit in a chair if there are many people in the public transportation. 
>> Furthermore, during peak times or when the transportation is crowded, finding a seat may not always be possible. 

If it rains, furthermore, it's so terrible to take it. 
>> Inclement weather, such as rain, can also make using public transportation less appealing.

However, a car is convenient in challenging weather. 
>>  On the other hand, owning a car offers its own set of advantages. Cars provide convenience, especially in challenging weather conditions, allowing you to travel comfortably regardless of the weather outside. 

We can go everywhere even the area has no the public transportation. 
>>  Additionally, having a car enables you to access areas where public transportation may not be available.

The cons is it's difficult to park a car in spot where we want to go because the parking lot may not be there.
>> Yet, there are challenges associated with owning a car as well. Finding parking, especially in crowded areas, can be difficult and time-consuming, as parking spots may be limited or unavailable.
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