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How do you handle difficult colleagues?

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I try to accept their personality first, and focus on positive aspect for making good synergy during working.
If my colleagues don't work on their duties, I will tell them clearly, but gently.
If it is related to personality, I will focus on serving guests and getting things done more efficiently.

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Hi there, Rachel!

It is never easy to deal with many colleagues because this means every person comes from different families and cultural backgrounds. Sometimes, the work is easy yet, dealing with difficult characters is more exhausting, Nevertheless, maintaining professionalism is the key to harmonious working relationships.

Congratulations for getting all of your sentences perfectly! My suggestions below may suggest the more natural or internationally accepted patterns. Read them carefully.

Excellent job!

See you next week.

-T. Donna~

I try to accept their personality first, and focus on positive aspect for making good synergy during working.
>> Correct!
Or:  I try to accept their personality first, and focus on their positive aspects to make good synergy during work.

If my colleagues don't work on their duties, I will tell them clearly, but gently.
>> Correct!
Or: (Remove the last comma.)

If it is related to personality, I will focus on serving guests and getting things done more efficiently.
>> Correct!

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