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Moving to a different part of a country after the retirement

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People usually live near the city because they need to live near workplace to commute easily.
After retirement, they can move to different place which is not near their workplace to save money or to experience different type of life.
If there are various welfare policies for retirees in the country, the movement can be decreased.

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People usually live near the city because they need to live near their workplace to commute easily.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
After retirement, they can move to different place which is not near their workplace to save money or to experience different type of life.
>>> After retirement, they can move to different [places] which [are far from ] their workplace to save money or to experience different [ lifestyles].
If there are various welfare policies for retirees in the country, the movement can be decreased.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
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