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Which country do you think is not a safe place to live in?

작성자: 황*은
2024-02-22 1180

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I have never been to forein countries except for Saipan, which is full of Koreans, so I don't know about safety of other countries well but I heard some news related to safety. When I was young, I heard that Mexico is not safe to live. People said that women are kidnapped even during the daytime, but I don't know whether it's true or not. Also there was a news that in India, many people raped a girl in a middle of street. India is wide so the safety level would be different between areas but it's definite some areas are extremely dangerous.

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Hi Seong Eun!
If you hear red flags about a certain country, better not take a risk. Did you know that there is a place in Mexico where a lot of Koreans flock? Most travelers consider Cancun to be safe most of the time. The region maintains its reputation as a low-crime, safe city even beyond the hotel zone. However, no matter where you are, it's a good idea to be cautious and aware of your surroundings.
Have a good searching :)
T. Aki

I have never been to forein countries except for Saipan, which is full of Koreans, so I don't know about safety of other countries well but I heard some news related to safety.
>>>  I have never been to foreign countries except for Saipan, which is full of Koreans, so I don't know about the safety of other countries well but I heard some news related to safety.

When I was young, I heard that Mexico is not safe to live. People said that women are kidnapped even during the daytime, but I don't know whether it's true or not.
>>>  When I was young, I heard that Mexico was not safe to live in. People say that women are kidnapped even during the daytime, but I don't know whether it's true or not.

Also there was a news that in India, many people raped a girl in a middle of street.
>>> Also there was news that in India, many people raped a girl in the middle of the street.

India is wide so the safety level would be different between areas but it's definite some areas are extremely dangerous.
>>> India is so wide, I think the safety level would be different between areas but it's definite some areas are extremely dangerous.
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