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My preference of travel style

작성자: 김*민
2024-02-21 825

회원님의 영작문

When I plan the domestic trip, I prefer to choice where I will go.
Because it is easy to getting information of cities in Korea.

But when I want to go abroad, package tour is better than tour that I prepare by myself.
I traveled foreign countries last year, France and Singapore.
When I decided to travel France with my friend, we organized all plans by ourselves.
We had a good time in France, but I would like have prepared our schedule perfect.
Because I was busy adjusting to the new department.

After that, I traveled Singapore with my coworkers by package tour.
The schedule was very hard for me, but we didn't have worry about missing train or metro.
The tour bus always took us to destinations! I think that it is a big advantage of package tour.

Because of these experiences, I prefer to package tour that go abroad.
So I reserved the package tour to going Hungary, Austrian Republic, Czech Republic in Chuseok!

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Very good, Min! You have explained in detail your preferences when travelling. Enjoy! ^^
-Khai
When I plan the domestic trip, I prefer to choice where I will go.

>> When I plan a domestic trip, I prefer to choose where I will go.

Because it is easy to getting information of cities in Korea.

>> It is easy to get information about cities in Korea.

But when I want to go abroad, package tour is better than tour that I prepare by myself.

>> But when I want to go abroad, a package tour is better than a tour I prepare by myself.

I traveled foreign countries last year, France and Singapore.
>> I traveled to two foreign countries last year, France and Singapore.
When I decided to travel France with my friend, we organized all plans by ourselves.
>> When I decided to travel to France with my friend, we organized all our plans by ourselves.
We had a good time in France, but I would like have prepared our schedule perfect.
>> We had a good time in France, but I would have prepared our schedule perfectly.
Because I was busy adjusting to the new department.
>> That time, I was busy adjusting to our new department.
After that, I traveled Singapore with my coworkers by package tour.

>> After that, I traveled to Singapore with my coworkers on a package tour.

The schedule was very hard for me, but we didn't have worry about missing train or metro.

>> The schedule was very hard for me, but we didn't have to worry about missing trains or the metro.

The tour bus always took us to destinations!
>> CORRECT
I think that it is a big advantage of package tour.
>> I think that it is a big advantage of a package tour.
Because of these experiences, I prefer to package tour that go abroad.

>> Because of these experiences, I prefer to have a package tour abroad.

So I reserved the package tour to going Hungary, Austrian Republic, Czech Republic in Chuseok!
>> So I reserved a package tour to Hungary, Austrian Republic, Czech Republic in Chuseok!
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