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HOMEWORK:
How do Koreans practice " cost-cutting"?

When i visited my father's office, I realized there are a lot of quite classic gadget and there's no any decoration. My dad told me that it's the normal way of cost-cutting in small-middle company. When i was in the military, all the stuff were quite old one. No matter how they have been looked and the stuff is old, companies or organizations tend to use old one. When we get on the bus and we transfer from other bus or subway, there is a transfer sale system that is we don't have to pay on next transportation. So we mustn't forget to tap our transportation card when we get off. In home, when we doesn't use cords, we plug it out because of saving the electric bill. At this time, I try not to go out so much. When I get along with my friends, I tend to spend a lot of money. There are so many ways of cost-cutting.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello there, Geon!
I am glad that you are aware of these things. Only a few people especially in your generation have concerns about this. Keep going and be mindful of the things around you! Be a good citizen!
T. Aki~

When I visited my father's office, I realized there are a lot of quite classic gadget and there's no any decoration.
>>> When I visited my father's office, I realized there is a lot of quite classic gadgets and there's no decoration.

My dad told me that it's the normal way of cost-cutting in small-middle company.
>>> My dad told me that it's the normal way of cost-cutting in small-middle companies.

When I was in the military, all the stuff were quite old one. No matter how they have been looked and the stuff is old, companies or organizations tend to use old one.
>>> When I was in the military, all the stuff was quite old. No matter how they have been looked at and the stuff is old, companies or organizations tend to use old ones.

When we get on the bus and we transfer from other bus or subway, there is a transfer sale system that is we don't have to pay on next transportation. 
>>>  When we get on the bus and we transfer from one bus to another or subway, there is a transfer sale system that we don't have to pay for the next transportation. 

So we mustn't forget to tap our transportation card when we get off.
>>>  CORRECT!

In home, when we doesn't use cords, we plug it out because of saving the electric bill.
>>> At home, when we don't use cords, we plug them out to save the electric bill

At this time, I try not to go out so much. When I get along with my friends, I tend to spend a lot of money.
>>> At this time, I try not to go out so much. When I get along with my friends, I tend to spend a lot of money.

There are so many ways of cost-cutting.
>>> CORRECT!

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