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Sometimes my personality is tired. When I have a job or go on a trip, I feel at ease when all the schedules are planned in my head from start to finish, the surrounding situation is recognized, and the order is arranged. However, even if I try to change my personality, I get older and my personality has changed through the environment and meeting people around me. For example, when there is a variable in a plan, the variable is naturally accepted, and small appointments or trips are sometimes made without a plan.

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They say that change is the only constant thing in the world. It is difficult to accept changes, but we have to adapt to them. This is also hard for me, Mia, so I totally understand you. ^^
-Khai
Sometimes my personality is tired. 
>> Sometimes, I usually get tired.
When I have a job or go on a trip, I feel at ease when all the schedules are planned in my head from start to finish, the surrounding situation is recognized, and the order is arranged.

>> CORRECT

OR

>> When I work or travel, I have peace of mind when all my schedules are properly scheduled and executed.

However, even if I try to change my personality, I get older and my personality has changed through the environment and meeting people around me. 

>> However, even if I try to change my personality, I get older, and my personality has changed through my environment and meeting people around me.

For example, when there is a variable in a plan, the variable is naturally accepted, and small appointments or trips are sometimes made without a plan.

>> CORRECT

OR

>> This happens when there are changes in a plan, and we need to make some changes. Also, when there are small appointments or short trips that are not planned.


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