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What do you think of people who say they would never get themselves vaccinated that they don’t belie

작성자: 박*호
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회원님의 영작문

Humanity has suffered from numerous infectious diseases.
There was the Black Death killed a third of Europe's population in the Middle Ages.
And COVID-19, which recently broke out, seems to be the first epidemic in modern times.
Fortunately, the vaccine was developed quickly and there was no disaster where many people died like in the past.
However, people who refuse to get vaccinated for various reasons have made it difficult for governments and ordinary citizens trying to prevent the spread of the epidemic.
I don't understand the psychological state of those people who prioritize their religious or political beliefs over modern medicine.
Even though freedom of religious and political beliefs as human beings should be respected,
Considering the nature of the epidemic, where a single person's infection can put countless people at risk, there should be no more tolerance for vaccine rejection.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Thank you so much, Sun! 

You never fail to do your homework. I really appreciate your hardwork! Keep it up!

- Kristine ^^ 

Humanity has suffered from numerous infectious diseases.
>> Correct. 
There was the Black Death killed a third of Europe's population in the Middle Ages.
>> There was the Black Death, which killed a third of Europe's population in the Middle Ages.
And COVID-19, which recently broke out, seems to be the first epidemic in modern times.
>> COVID-19, which recently broke out and seems to be the first epidemic in modern times.
Fortunately, the vaccine was developed quickly and there was no disaster where many people died like in the past.
>> Fortunately, the vaccine was developed quickly, and there wasn't a catastrophe like in the past that took a lot of lives.
However, people who refuse to get vaccinated for various reasons have made it difficult for governments and ordinary citizens trying to prevent the spread of the epidemic.
>> However, the government and citizens are finding it difficult to prevent the epidemic from spreading because of some people who, for various reasons, refuse to get vaccinated.
I don't understand the psychological state of those people who prioritize their religious or political beliefs over modern medicine.
>> Correct. 
Even though freedom of religious and political beliefs as human beings should be respected,
>> Even though freedom of religious and political beliefs as human beings should be respected.
Considering the nature of the epidemic, where a single person's infection can put countless people at risk, there should be no more tolerance for vaccine rejection.
>> Correct. 
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