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Describe a piece of technology you find useful in your daily life. What is it? How do you use it? Wh

작성자: 최*훈
2024-02-21 1841

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I think the useful technology is speed reading because if we have it, we can use everything that kind of reading. Actually, I have this technology through a lot of reading in my childhood thanks to my parents. In the past, I didn't notice that It's useful but I realized it in the middle school. When I test the subject of Korean and English, I can read fastly. Also, I use it while I need to read thesis or article for my task. It adventage is that you can understand whole content rapidly as you can. It's very useful when you should to read a book for book report which you have to submit to teacher. Furthermore, the bis test in Korea, 수능 has long content about test. That's a big reason the necessity of speed reading.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Sarah! I think reading is indeed a good skill to build as a child. It can help you increase your knowledge and learn other skills as well. I'm glad you have a nick for reading. 
~~Teacher Ryka^^


I think the useful technology is speed reading because if we have it, we can use everything that kind of reading. 
>> I think the most useful technology for me is speed reading because if we have it can enhance our reading skills.

Actually, I have this technology through a lot of reading in my childhood thanks to my parents. 
>> Actually, I have this technology because of reading a lot in my childhood thanks to my parents.

In the past, I didn't notice that It's useful but I realized it in the middle school. 
>> I didn't notice this in the past but as I got to middle school I slowly noticed how useful it is.

When I test the subject of Korean and English, I can read fastly. 
>> When I take my Korean and English test, I can read faster.

Also, I use it while I need to read thesis or article for my task. 
>> I also use it when I need to read a thesis or an article.

It adventage is that you can understand whole content rapidly as you can. 
>> Its advantage is that you get to understand the whole content faster than others.

It's very useful when you should to read a book for book report which you have to submit to teacher. 
>> It's useful especially when you have to read a book for a book report and submit it right away to your teacher.

Furthermore, the bis test in Korea, 수능 has long content about test. 
>> Furthermore, one of the biggest tests in Korea, has long reading contents.

That's a big reason the necessity of speed reading.
>> That's the biggest reason why I consider it a necessity.
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