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First, We have to know that city or country before we go to vacation.
such as subway station's location, bus timetable, or arround accomodation what we stay,
It makes us increased time allows for exploring everywhere, making it more efficient.

Second, It's going where I want to go.
As I loves the sea, I prefer going to places with the ocean rather than areas with many mountains.
Also, It is good to eat what I prefer than eat food that I don't particularly enjoy.

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First, We have to know that city or country before we go to vacation.
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It makes us increased time allows for exploring everywhere, making it more efficient.
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Second, it's going where I want to go.
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As I loves the sea, I prefer going to places with the ocean rather than areas with many mountains.
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