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~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What fusion-food would you like to try?

There are many fusion-foods in South Korea.
For example, it is a hamburger, but a few restaurant sold the using rice instead of bread bun and several fusion foods using kimchi.
And a few years ago, young people became addicted to cheese, so there are many Korean food culture got weird.
Because, they mixed all the food with cheese and sold it.
Fortunately, these strange foods don't last long time.
The reason is that these foods taste is not good.
Anyway, I have a wondering fusion-food in these days.
The menu name is called "Korean Taco."
This food made of taco, a Mexican dish and pork belly or bulgogi made with Korean dish.
This food name included "Korean", but it's hard to find in Korea.
Because this food is made and sold by Koreans living in the Americas land.
And except for franchise, taco dish also hard to find in Korea.
So if I have a chance, I want eat it.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Keon!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille

~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What fusion-food would you like to try?

There are many fusion-foods in South Korea.
>> CORRECT!
For example, it is a hamburger, but a few restaurant sold the using rice instead of bread bun and several fusion foods using kimchi.
>> For example, it is a hamburger, but a few restaurants sell it using rice instead of the burger buns, and several fusion foods use kimchi.
And a few years ago, young people became addicted to cheese, so there are many Korean food culture got weird.
>> And a few years ago, young people became addicted to cheese, so the Korean food culture got weird.
Because, they mixed all the food with cheese and sold it.
>> CORRECT!
Fortunately, these strange foods don't last long time.
>> Fortunately, these strange foods didn't last long time.
The reason is that these foods taste is not good.
>> The reason is that these foods do not taste good.
OR >> The reason is that these foods taste terrible.
Anyway, I have a wondering fusion-food in these days.
>> Anyway, I have been wondering about the fusion-food these days.
The menu's name is called "Korean Taco."
>> CORRECT!
This food made of taco, a Mexican dish and pork belly or bulgogi made with Korean dish.
>> This food is made of taco, a Mexican dish and pork belly or bulgogi, which is a Korean dish.
This food name included "Korean", but it's hard to find in Korea.
>> CORRECT!
Because this food is made and sold by Koreans living in the Americas land.
>> It's because this food is made and sold by Koreans living in the USA.
And except for franchise, taco dish also hard to find in Korea.
>> And except for franchise, tacos are hard to find in Korea.
So if I have a chance, I want to eat it.
>> CORRECT!

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