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Things that I will be able to do in English in the future.
English is the key to the global world. If you can speak English well, you can access various contents such as English books, movies, music, and more. Also, if you can listen to and understand English directly without a translator, it will be very helpful for you to travel abroad. There is a limit to communication with a translator. Personally, studying languages is good for mental health, and learning and emorizing English helps prevent dementia.

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You have cited many benefits of English, Mia. ^^ I agree with all that you have mentioned. Indeed, English is beneficial for our future. ^^
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Things that I will be able to do in English in the future.

>> These are the things that I will be able to do with English in the future.

English is the key to the global world. 

>> CORRECT

If you can speak English well, you can access various contents such as English books, movies, music, and more.

>> If you can speak English well, you can access various contents, such as English books, movies, music, and more. 

Also, if you can listen to and understand English directly without a translator, it will be very helpful for you to travel abroad.

>> CORRECT

OR

>> Also, if you can listen to and understand English directly without a translator, it will be very helpful for you to travel to many different countries. 

There is a limit to communication with a translator. 

>> CORRECT

OR

>> There are some limits when you communicate using a translator. 

Personally, studying languages is good for mental health, and learning and emorizing English helps prevent dementia.

>> Personally, studying languages is good for mental health, and learning and memorizing English helps prevent dementia.


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