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How long should we know before we get married?

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I don't think that the period is important. I think the quality of the relationship is more important than the duration of it. Even though a couple has met for a long time, they don't know each other if they don't meet honestly. Actually some young people are disappointed at each other's genuine characteristics after they get married. Whether the period is short or not, the most important thing is that we should meet honestly and show our real appearance.

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Hi, Gi Yean!
I agree! While it's true that time can allow a couple to get to know each other better, there is still no assurance that what they are showing is genuine. Therefore, the length of time should not be the main basis for getting married.
- T. Caitlyn
I don't think that the period is important. 
>> CORRECT
I think the quality of the relationship is more important than the duration of it. 
>> CORRECT
Even though a couple has met for a long time, they don't know each other if they don't meet honestly. 
>> CORRECT
Actually, some young people are disappointed at each other's genuine characteristics after they get married. 
>> CORRECT
Whether the period is short or not, the most important thing is that we should meet honestly and show our real appearance.
>> CORRECT

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