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I'm not sure either.
I'm not a person who values tradition that much, so I don't pay much attention to it, but in order to maintain traditions like New Year's Day in the future, I think we should pay as much attention to our traditional houses, clothes, and actions as possible.

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Hi Da Hye, 

It's okay not to know much about tradition. Everyone has their own interests and priorities. However, it's also important to recognize the value of traditions in preserving cultural heritage. Even if it's not something you prioritize personally, maintaining traditions like New Year's Day can help keep our cultural identity alive for future generations. Your perspective is valid, and it's good to think about how we can honor and preserve our traditions for the future. 

~Teacher Cathy 

 

I'm not sure either. 

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OR>>I'm unsure as well. 

I'm not a person who values tradition that much, so I don't pay much attention to it, but in order to maintain traditions like New Year's Day in the future, I think we should pay as much attention to our traditional houses, clothes, and actions as possible. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>I'm not someone who places a high value on tradition, so I don't pay much attention to it. However, I believe that in order to preserve traditions like New Year's Day for future generations, we should strive to maintain traditional houses, clothing, and customs as much as possible. 

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