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Describea book, movie, or piece of music that has had a significant impact on you and why.

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Especially, I'm obsessed pop music. When I had have a important test, I watched the video wich name is 'This is me' in the movie of 'The greatest showman'. A singer had to sing well more in front of film producer because production company was thinking whether to make a movie of 'The greatest showman'. She started to sing 'This is me' although she was afraid to sing in front of the music stand. However, she was singing very well and everyone were impressed it. That song has good lyrics about love myself and don't be ashamed of oneself.
One of my favorite part is 'And I know that I deserve your love, There's nothing I'm not worthy of'. It makes to have more confident about myself. Furthermore, I recommend that another song wich it makes to love yourself is 'Who says' by Selena Gomez.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Sarah! I think these music are indeed very nice to listen to. Thank you for sharing your opinion.
~~Teacher Ryka^^


Especially, I'm obsessed pop music. 
>> I am especially obsessed with pop music.

When I had have a important test, I watched the video wich name is 'This is me' in the movie of 'The greatest showman'. 
>> When I have an important test, I would usually watch the music video which is entitled, "This is me" from the movie "The Greatest Showman."

A singer had to sing well more in front of film producer because production company was thinking whether to make a movie of 'The greatest showman'.
>> The singer had to sing better in front of the film producer to entice him because he was having second thoughts about producing the movie.

She started to sing 'This is me' although she was afraid to sing in front of the music stand. 
>> She started to sing the song  even though she was afraid to sing on the music stand.

However, she was singing very well and everyone were impressed it. 
>> However, her singing skills impressed everyone.

That song has good lyrics about love myself and don't be ashamed of oneself.
>> The song has good lyrics about loving and being more confident about oneself.

One of my favorite part is 'And I know that I deserve your love, There's nothing I'm not worthy of'. 
>> One of my favorite lines from the song is " And I know that I deserve your love, There's nothing I'm not worthy of."

It makes to have more confident about myself. 
>> It talks about having more confidence about oneself.

Furthermore, I recommend that another song wich it makes to love yourself is 'Who says' by Selena Gomez.
>> Furthermore, I would recommend another song by Selena Gomez entitled, "Who says".
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