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Hello teacher
How are you doing?
Did you relaxed During the week?
Homework
Whatis the best thing to do in Jeju during winter
My answer
My favorite in winter go to mountain Halla nad see the sunrise
It's very beautiful
I really recommend to you

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Hi, Jae Hyeon!

Greetings! Thank you for answering your homework.
I did relax during the weekend.
Thank you for asking.^^

~T. Divina^^

Here are some things to consider:

1. My favorite in winter go to mountain Halla nad see the sunrise.
>>My favorite thing to do in winter is to go to Halla mountain and see the sunrise.

2. It's very beautiful.
>>CORRECT!

3. I really recommend to you.
>>I really recommend it to you.

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