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(Q) Have you asked for a replacement of anything?
(A) My wife and I came to Canada and bought bicycles to exercise. The rear wheel of my wife's bike was constantly making noises, so I asked them to replace it and they did.

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Good day, Joshua!
Good to hear that in Canada it won't be a problem to do some replacements even if you already used it. That is notthe same in another country like the Philippines, they woud uggest repair immediately. 
See you later.
T. Aki~

My wife and I came to Canada and bought bicycles to exercise.
>>> CORRECT!

The rear wheel of my wife's bike was constantly making noises, so I asked them to replace it and they did.
>>> CORRECT!
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