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What do you think is the worst social problem?

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There are many kinds of the problems in the social media such as a scam, stealing information, and stalking. However, in my opinion, the worst social issue is that people believe misinformation. Even if the news and information are wrong, lots of people say "That's right or that's correct", the rest of people could believe it. I believe that much people have an overpower than less people around the world. Especially, in my country, people tend to gather what they will do like a demo, assemble, and investment. If you say the right things, they wouldn't believe it because you're powerless. By the way, it rains for a whole today. So, I couldn't see Guatemala girl. I'm going to pray the god. "Please give me a chance to meet her!!"

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Hi, Eric!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille


There are many kinds of the problems in the social media such as a scam, stealing information, and stalking. 
>> There are many kinds of problems in the social media such as a scam, stealing information, and stalking. 
However, in my opinion, the worst social issue is that people believe misinformation. 
>> However, in my opinion, the worst social issue is that people are misinformed. 
OR >>  However, in my opinion, the worst social issue is that people believe in false pieces of information. 
Even if the news and information are wrong, lots of people say "That's right or that's correct", the rest of people could believe it. 
>> CORRECT!
I believe that much people have an overpower than less people around the world. 
>> I believe that many people have much power than some people around the world. 
Especially, in my country, people tend to gather what they will do like a demo, assemble, and investment. 
>> Especially, in my country, people tend to gather what they will do like demo, assemble, and invest. 
If you say the right things, they wouldn't believe it because you're powerless. 
>> CORRECT!
By the way, it rains for a whole day today. 
>> CORRECT!
So, I couldn't see Guatemala girl. 
>> CORRECT!
I'm going to pray to God. "Please give me a chance to meet her!!"
>> CORRECT!

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