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Catch up the fashion

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What you have to realize is that social media is the best way to catch up the latest fashion.
I'm used to search for new items in online shopping application while I look trendy style from the SNS accounts of famous influencers and friends.
And also, I prefer to buy clothes in store, I sometimes get a recommendation of clerks.
These days, in Korea, short tops like cropped t-shirt, short padded jacket are in fashion in young generation.

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Hi, Ms. Yu Jin! I found your composition on staying up-to-date with fashion trends to be insightful and engaging! Indeed, there are many means we can take these days to stay on top of current styles. Thank you for your time and effort to complete this homework.
~T. Jenna

What you have to realize is that social media is the best way to catch up the latest fashion.
Correct, or
>>Realize that social media is the best way to stay up-to-date on the latest fashions.
I'm used to search for new items in online shopping application while I look trendy style from the SNS accounts of famous influencers and friends.
>>I'm used to searching for new items in online shopping applications while looking/seeking inspiration for trendy styles from the SNS accounts of famous influencers and friends.
And also, I prefer to buy clothes in store, I sometimes get a recommendation of clerks.
>>And also, I prefer to buy clothes in store as I sometimes get recommendations from clerks.
These days, in Korea, short tops like cropped t-shirt, short padded jacket are in fashion in young generation.
>>These days, short tops like cropped t-shirts and short padded jackets are in fashion among the young generation.

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