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Have you ever helped a friend when they really needed help ? what happened ?

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After I got my homework today, " have you ever helped a friend ?"
I looked back my life for 57 years for a while.
But I was disappointed that I couldn't remember helping my friend as much as saving his life or selling my house to help him financially.
It's probably because I'm not the type to ask my friends for help too much, so my friends don't ask me too much.
In my school days, I comforted my friend when he was sad because he broke up with his girlfriend and stayed up all night with him when his parents died.
Also, after graduating the school and getting a job.
When my friend was eliminated from promotion, I comforted him.
When he ran out of his house after a quarrel with his wife, I put him to sleep at my house.
Today's homework seems to be an opportunity to think deeply about what is true friendship in my life.

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Happy Friday, Sun! 

When a friend is going through a difficult time, it's important to be supportive and understanding. The best way to do this is to let them know that you are there for them and willing to listen. Showing your friend that you care can help them feel better and know they're being supported.

- Kristine ^^ 

After I got my homework today, " have you ever helped a friend ?"
>> Upon checking my homework today, I asked myself "Have I ever helped a friend?" 
I looked back my life for 57 years for a while.
>> I  looked back on my 57 years of existence.
But I was disappointed that I couldn't remember helping my friend as much as saving his life or selling my house to help him financially.
>> However, I was frustrated that I couldn't recall doing more for my friend—like saving his life or selling my house to raise the money he needed.
It's probably because I'm not the type to ask my friends for help too much, so my friends don't ask me too much.
>> Correct. 
In my school days, I comforted my friend when he was sad because he broke up with his girlfriend and stayed up all night with him when his parents died.
>> Correct. 
Also, after graduating the school and getting a job.
>> Also, after graduating from school and getting a job,.
When my friend was eliminated from promotion, I comforted him.
>> I comforted my friend when he  didn't get promoted.
When he ran out of his house after a quarrel with his wife, I put him to sleep at my house.
>> I let him sleep in my house when he ran out of his house after a quarrel with his wife.
Today's homework seems to be an opportunity to think deeply about what is true friendship in my life.
>> Today's homework seems to be an opportunity to think deeply about what true friendship is in my life.
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